my writing steps

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Today In class had to look at our term four writing

Punctuation: I have used capital letters and full stops in the correct places and I am trying to use other punctuation like commas, question marks and exclamation marks , have used speech marks to show someone is talking but I have a few mistakes.

My next step: Use commas to show clauses (different parts of a sentence Add punctuation to create mood and show greater detail to hook my readers in.

Vocab: I use words that give the reader detailed and specific information

• Adjectives

• Precise nouns and verbs

• Similes

• Metaphors

• Alliteration

• Topic Words

Next step: Use words and phrases that grab the reader’s attention and interest.

Organisation : My ideas are in order I understand what I am writing about, but I have not used many ideas or sentences.

next step: I need to start sequencing my ideas correctly in paragraphs.

Sentence Structure: Some of my sentences tell the reader what I want them to know

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Some of my sentences are long, and some of my sentences are short.

Snow Day

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Today I had to write a story about this picture.

There was a nice dark blue sky in between two beautiful tree. The trees were dark black with small branches and with no leaves. Next to the big tall trees I see I more bigger tree with no leaves again there was a little chimney from a little house with smoke coming out of it. The little house was made out of wood and there was lots of snow of the roof. There was lots of snow of the ground with little bushes with no leaves. Next to the house there was a boy.

The boy looked like a teenager. He was wearing a hoodie with Santa clauses face on it. He was wearing dark blue jeans and he was wearing black boots. He had a black beanie on his head and yellow and blue scarf. He was sitting on a log and playing a guitar. It sounded like he was playing a Christmas song. 

Suddenly the little house next to him was falling apart. When it fell down the boy went on his knee and  was shocked and then he went all teary and said "That was the only house I had what do I do now". He layed down on the snow and he cried.

I walked up to him and helped him up. Then I told him "you can live with me I have no problem with that" The he said "really thanks" He wiped his tears and walked with me so we could go to my house. Happily ever after the end.

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healthy menu

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Today in my blog i ma telling you what i did for health. For health I had to fill out a healthy menu for Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday. I didn't finish it but im up too Friday.

here is my slide.

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B&E

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Today in my blog I had to answer some questions about B&E. 

here are the questions:

Who is in your group, who is your business adviser? 

Aone, Riansha, Isabella and Chelsea.

What is your product/company, how did you come up with it?

My product is Christmas ornaments and we just thought of Christmas and thats how we came up with Christmas ornaments. 

Where will you sell your products?

On market day we will sell them at Hornby High School.

Why are we having market day? 

We are having market day because we are raising money for our end of year trip Jelly Park.

How are you enjoying the experience?

It is really fun working out some challenging money thing.

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100 word challenge

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Today I had to do a 100 word challenge. It was about this huge swimming pool.

Here is my writing:

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The cost of a class pet

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Today I had to write in a google drawing of the cost of the class pet. I had t work with a buddy and had to choose a pet that was good for a class. There was a lots of questions I had to research and I had to put the cost all in a google drawing. Miss only gave a $150 dollars and we had to research how much all the accessories and pet cost. Me and my buddy chose a lizard cause they are cheaper than the other good pets.

Here is our google drawing.

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Is it important to learn about business and enterprise at school????

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Today I am going to tell if I think it is important to learn about business and enterprise at school. I think it is important because if one day you dont learn about these things then maybe you will do the wrong thing with your money and spend it on stuff you want and not what you need.

For example like you had to pay the rent or something and you have enough money but you go and buy something at store and for example like a play station and it was over 500 dollar and you buy it then you dont have enough for your rent then you would maybe not have a house. We should learn this so you don't overspend your money and you spend on the right thing like the things you need and not things you want.

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