my writing steps

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Today In class had to look at our term four writing

Punctuation: I have used capital letters and full stops in the correct places and I am trying to use other punctuation like commas, question marks and exclamation marks , have used speech marks to show someone is talking but I have a few mistakes.

My next step: Use commas to show clauses (different parts of a sentence Add punctuation to create mood and show greater detail to hook my readers in.

Vocab: I use words that give the reader detailed and specific information

• Adjectives

• Precise nouns and verbs

• Similes

• Metaphors

• Alliteration

• Topic Words

Next step: Use words and phrases that grab the reader’s attention and interest.

Organisation : My ideas are in order I understand what I am writing about, but I have not used many ideas or sentences.

next step: I need to start sequencing my ideas correctly in paragraphs.

Sentence Structure: Some of my sentences tell the reader what I want them to know

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Some of my sentences are long, and some of my sentences are short.

Snow Day

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Today I had to write a story about this picture.

There was a nice dark blue sky in between two beautiful tree. The trees were dark black with small branches and with no leaves. Next to the big tall trees I see I more bigger tree with no leaves again there was a little chimney from a little house with smoke coming out of it. The little house was made out of wood and there was lots of snow of the roof. There was lots of snow of the ground with little bushes with no leaves. Next to the house there was a boy.

The boy looked like a teenager. He was wearing a hoodie with Santa clauses face on it. He was wearing dark blue jeans and he was wearing black boots. He had a black beanie on his head and yellow and blue scarf. He was sitting on a log and playing a guitar. It sounded like he was playing a Christmas song. 

Suddenly the little house next to him was falling apart. When it fell down the boy went on his knee and  was shocked and then he went all teary and said "That was the only house I had what do I do now". He layed down on the snow and he cried.

I walked up to him and helped him up. Then I told him "you can live with me I have no problem with that" The he said "really thanks" He wiped his tears and walked with me so we could go to my house. Happily ever after the end.

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healthy menu

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Today in my blog i ma telling you what i did for health. For health I had to fill out a healthy menu for Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday. I didn't finish it but im up too Friday.

here is my slide.

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