
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 5, 2020
My narrative writing
Hey people
Today I have been doing some narrative writing. So my teacher sent me a writing document and it was about keys .I did some writing the key in the picture. The key things we needed to have in our writing were the orientation, complication, sequence & events, resolution and full stops and capital letters. Here is a picture of my work. I hope you like my narrative writing please comment. Thank you for reading.

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Hello Esha, Its me Talisa in your class if you forgot. Anyway I like your blog post. I like how your post is presented. I don't think my narrative writing is as good as yours. Next time you should use a more intresting tittle. Goodbye
ReplyDeleteI am glad that Lucy was honest and went back and paid for the items that she left the shop with.
ReplyDeleteWell done Esha.Your story gave me a picture in my head.I felt like I was climbing into the house.I probably would of screamed if I had seen someone though.
Hi Esha Caitlin here and I love your blog post. I just wanted to remind you to use labels on it that Miss Scott is teaching us to put in. How long did it take you to make the spectacular piece of work?
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