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Tuesday, June 22, 2021

Why you cant live without a shelter

 Hello readers


 A shelter is a really important invention you cant live without it because Its a place where you can stay warm and wont get wet on rainy weather. If you didn't have a shelter then you wont have a place to sleep and stay safe you will be in the road. You will be safe on dangerous weather like storms, thunder and floods. A example is that poor people will have a place to live and you wont have to be sick outside in the cold. A shelter in a place where you can sleep safe under the roof.

My house is a really safe house because its made out of bricks and it does not have any holes on the roof so is its raining my roof won't be leaking. inside my house its really warm and sometimes its cold but I have a heater so I can warm my house. The how my house is really safe. That's why you can not live without a shelter.

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  1. AnonymousJune 23, 2021 at 11:43 AM

    Kia ora Esha

    thanks for sharing your writing about the importance of shelter! Remember your writing group is aiming for two paragraphs using the OREO format. I wonder if you can expand your ideas and had some more R-Reasons and E-Examples to make your writing longer and have more detail!

    - Miss Birtch

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